Biography!?#

I did my biography on Sir Edmund Hillary. Some of his qualitys were that he had a strong belief of fair play and a fair go. e.g : He got really annoyed when he heard that the government weren’t going to send a party to get a climber who got stuck about half way up the mountain.

3 thoughts on “Biography!?#

  • June 5, 2017 at 12:28 am
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    Hi Dan,

    I loved your biography except I think it could be a little longer besides and that great job.

    From Ella

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  • June 5, 2017 at 12:29 am
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    Hi Danny,
    I think you presented your cereal box well. I think though you could add a reflection and some other questions that you have.
    Cheers Jarrod

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  • June 5, 2017 at 12:29 am
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    Hi Daniel,

    You did a good job on reading out and showing your presentation today, next time you should make more props and explain more about your character.

    From Caitlin

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